tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post115337085579344631..comments2024-02-19T19:45:32.122-05:00Comments on Poet Mom: SEXY Poem for Poetry ThursdayJanuaryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13036651950996873368noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post-1154169437573728552006-07-29T06:37:00.000-04:002006-07-29T06:37:00.000-04:00one word: NICE!one word: NICE!GoGohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15564750293363156213noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post-1153969926761419332006-07-26T23:12:00.000-04:002006-07-26T23:12:00.000-04:00man, this poem is awesome. love it!man, this poem is awesome. love it!Leahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17381213681911598073noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post-1153583071194608202006-07-22T11:44:00.000-04:002006-07-22T11:44:00.000-04:00You definitely rocked the house, girl! I remember...You definitely rocked the house, girl! I remember that feeling quite well and you captured it perfectly. I don't even have to tell you which line is my favorite because the choir already chimed in :-). Good job.Dani In NChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15032707452740200776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post-1153513540678563302006-07-21T16:25:00.000-04:002006-07-21T16:25:00.000-04:00Thanks for the comments.*still blushing*Thanks for the comments.<BR/><BR/>*still blushing*Januaryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13036651950996873368noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post-1153490562490688322006-07-21T10:02:00.000-04:002006-07-21T10:02:00.000-04:00Wow, this sort of poem coming from you really surp...Wow, this sort of poem coming from you really surprised me, very well done!!! I need a drink, lolLyrically speakinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07695704757793935348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post-1153486288146250652006-07-21T08:51:00.000-04:002006-07-21T08:51:00.000-04:00I really like the title and especially "I was happ...I really like the title and especially "I was happy hour/poured in a mini-skirt" <BR/>Great line, great poem.Emilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08058447022953846355noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post-1153483072653097212006-07-21T07:57:00.000-04:002006-07-21T07:57:00.000-04:00wow....this made me bite my lip as i read this.thi...wow....this made me bite my lip as i read this.<BR/>this one hits you right between the eyes, no punches pulled. very carnal. i like this...it made me smile a lot :)Madeleinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03515694965912176762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post-1153464795931835962006-07-21T02:53:00.000-04:002006-07-21T02:53:00.000-04:00I don't have anything to add, really, but I just w...I don't have anything to add, really, but I just wanted to say I love it - I am getting a great dose of sexy poetry this week.Catherinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08236329216260906624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post-1153459015015983632006-07-21T01:16:00.000-04:002006-07-21T01:16:00.000-04:00A hot sticky summer night is keeping me from sleep...A hot sticky summer night is keeping me from sleep tonight. I stumbled into you (holding in my hand, cold pizza, no less)looking for something soothing to read. Or at least feed me better than the slice of pie.<BR/><BR/>"as local as my fingertips"<BR/><BR/>"just clumsy, fractional fucking"<BR/><BR/>"the lip biting, sloppy goodness"<BR/><BR/>Damn woman! <BR/><BR/>A hot sticky summer night continues to keep me from sleep tonight.Carol (a.k.a. Lady Wordsmith)https://www.blogger.com/profile/07604691154032294513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post-1153448386782502992006-07-20T22:19:00.000-04:002006-07-20T22:19:00.000-04:00Liked the miniskirt line, as well as "The quick bl...Liked the miniskirt line, as well as "The quick blows of our bodies/struck together like rocks/catching spark". I too found this extremely relatable (though I found my pizza days a little later...)Ceebiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13480362932552752240noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post-1153432449387063882006-07-20T17:54:00.000-04:002006-07-20T17:54:00.000-04:00Talk about working it! And you know, sometimes yo...Talk about working it! And you know, sometimes you just got to name it, exactly for what it is, and you do. <BR/><BR/>Sorry if next time that I take a bite of pizza, I'll have a little January buzzing in me.Jim Brockhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14408507847342833145noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post-1153430815855686622006-07-20T17:26:00.000-04:002006-07-20T17:26:00.000-04:00oh January, you minx! this was lip-smackingly deli...oh January, you minx! this was lip-smackingly delicious - and i too loved the mini skirt :-)<BR/>xSusannah Conwayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11729273567277588887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post-1153423485623535032006-07-20T15:24:00.000-04:002006-07-20T15:24:00.000-04:00I liked the part about walking in to the sunlight ...I liked the part about walking in to the sunlight afterwards...as if the world had changed, because you had. You captured this exporation of a new side to yourself...very well.wendyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14586814769281622578noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post-1153417774671169852006-07-20T13:49:00.000-04:002006-07-20T13:49:00.000-04:00Fabulous beautiful poetry, just cos you call a spa...Fabulous beautiful poetry, just cos you call a spade a spade doesn't mean it doesn't sound great! I love it.Verityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09734733398990937504noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post-1153417132433021472006-07-20T13:38:00.000-04:002006-07-20T13:38:00.000-04:00Yum...brave, bold, and tasty writing here. "The q...Yum...brave, bold, and tasty writing here. "The quick blows of our bodies/struck together like rocks/catching spark" Loved this one!Left-handed Trees...https://www.blogger.com/profile/06057727021295729384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post-1153415107031803262006-07-20T13:05:00.000-04:002006-07-20T13:05:00.000-04:00Truth be told, I was REALLY looking forward to thi...Truth be told, I was REALLY looking forward to this prompt. <BR/><BR/>Funny, I almost cut the line "happy hour poured into a miniskirt." And now I'm glad I didn't.<BR/><BR/>Can't wait to read everyone's posts this week!Januaryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13036651950996873368noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post-1153413690664879942006-07-20T12:41:00.000-04:002006-07-20T12:41:00.000-04:00Great job, Jan! I had a feeling you'd come up with...Great job, Jan! I had a feeling you'd come up with something fab for this prompt. And like everyone else, I think the line "Happy hour poured into a miniskirt" is destined to become a classic. It's so perfect!Deb Rhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03322863748665701618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post-1153410043156131422006-07-20T11:40:00.000-04:002006-07-20T11:40:00.000-04:00I join the chorus of those who love "Happy hour po...I join the chorus of those who love "Happy hour poured into a miniskirt." Maybe I (cough) relate a bit too much. Raw and relatable...I like it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post-1153404847155675642006-07-20T10:14:00.000-04:002006-07-20T10:14:00.000-04:00the small town of my body--a great line, among man...the small town of my body--a great line, among many great lines. Lady, you said you are nothin' fancy. You are ALL fancy!Joyce Ellen Davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13494251587598676788noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post-1153404362558182172006-07-20T10:06:00.000-04:002006-07-20T10:06:00.000-04:00Love it!! Especially, "Happy hour poured into a m...Love it!! Especially, "Happy hour poured into a miniskirt! Great writing!jzrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05938966640494785871noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post-1153402525229244692006-07-20T09:35:00.000-04:002006-07-20T09:35:00.000-04:00This pretty much sums up that sex can mean anythin...This pretty much sums up that sex can mean anything. I like it! And I'm loving "Happy hour poured into a miniskirt". Your metaphors are always witty, irreverant but right on the mark!claireylovehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16691439928758477628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post-1153399180563425142006-07-20T08:39:00.000-04:002006-07-20T08:39:00.000-04:00Fractional fucking? Ass up, head down? Happy hour ...Fractional fucking? Ass up, head down? Happy hour poured into a miniskirt?<BR/><BR/>Yep, works for me. This poem is just as good as pizza.mareymercyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03407666873261385487noreply@blogger.com