tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post1403395177377575164..comments2024-03-29T01:19:03.714-04:00Comments on Poet Mom: NaPoWriMo 10Januaryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13036651950996873368noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post-43086797608551129802007-04-11T20:39:00.000-04:002007-04-11T20:39:00.000-04:00Thanks. I wrote this really late last night, so I ...Thanks. I wrote this really late last night, so I think it needs a lot of work. Good suggestion--I'll keep that in mind during the revision.Januaryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13036651950996873368noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post-58871733356523255132007-04-11T16:08:00.000-04:002007-04-11T16:08:00.000-04:00I love the line about not wanting to be given away...I love the line about not wanting to be given away, but go freely! I found the repetition of the age 30 a little bit awkward, but otherwise really love the spirit and love which comes through in this poem.Kamsinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07039627235813416300noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post-23777735751963425892007-04-11T15:46:00.000-04:002007-04-11T15:46:00.000-04:00Greenish Lady, thanks. I haven't been to your blog...Greenish Lady, thanks. I haven't been to your blog in a while either so I hope to get caught up very soon.Januaryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13036651950996873368noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post-44042260267067356622007-04-11T15:45:00.000-04:002007-04-11T15:45:00.000-04:00Thanks Brian. I am feeling a little better. The wa...Thanks Brian. I am feeling a little better. The wake is Friday and funeral is Saturday so I'm preparing myself for the next few days.<BR/><BR/>Haven't been by your blog in a while but will do so soon.Januaryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13036651950996873368noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post-56377313917710910332007-04-11T14:31:00.000-04:002007-04-11T14:31:00.000-04:00Thank you January for allowing us to be witnesses....Thank you January for allowing us to be witnesses.<BR/><BR/>I hope you are feeling well today.<BR/><BR/>((hugs))Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post-30706240621778982632007-04-11T14:10:00.000-04:002007-04-11T14:10:00.000-04:00I love this, especially when we come to where she ...I love this, especially when we come to where she didn't want to be given away, but to "go freely". Wonderful!GreenishLadyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16344455769443353585noreply@blogger.com