tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post4856326673045807957..comments2024-02-19T19:45:32.122-05:00Comments on Poet Mom: November PAD 8Januaryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13036651950996873368noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post-24749397543078622882010-11-17T10:34:39.395-05:002010-11-17T10:34:39.395-05:00I read this poem feeling joy, and pride (for you) ...I read this poem feeling joy, and pride (for you) and savored the moment with you both as if I were there participating with you in such a simple but special moment while sharing the day to 'repairs' we all encounter in our days. No matter what the experience of togetherness, there is some honorable about showing a young son that mommy can fix a toilet and find it important to show him how it can be done!Heidi Gnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post-22753616765222912010-11-09T22:00:27.051-05:002010-11-09T22:00:27.051-05:00Thanks! The third stanza feels unfinished. Not sur...Thanks! The third stanza feels unfinished. Not surprising given the quick turn.Januaryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13036651950996873368noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post-14971532714865444362010-11-09T18:58:04.677-05:002010-11-09T18:58:04.677-05:00This one is really lovely- the first stanza is esp...This one is really lovely- the first stanza is especially strong.DJ Vorreyerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02166957214456197239noreply@blogger.com