tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post929639398323343950..comments2024-02-19T19:45:32.122-05:00Comments on Poet Mom: Poem for Poetry ThursdayJanuaryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13036651950996873368noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post-21550139054101879262007-06-14T02:55:00.000-04:002007-06-14T02:55:00.000-04:00Brilliant stuff! Only just discovered your blog & ...Brilliant stuff! Only just discovered your blog & lovin your writing! Keep up the fab work, hun!Fudgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06724308987700298977noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post-3352383283054508632007-06-11T05:11:00.000-04:002007-06-11T05:11:00.000-04:00All I can say is this... if you wrote this while y...All I can say is this... if you wrote this while you were in a 'funk', I can't wait to see you at the top of your game!!<BR/><BR/>You go girl!!<BR/><BR/>:) blondie<BR/><BR/>PS. I will come and visit again!!Blondiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08726153633438333682noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post-40793179697829778492007-06-10T06:49:00.001-04:002007-06-10T06:49:00.001-04:00And thanks everyone for the kind words.And thanks everyone for the kind words.Januaryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13036651950996873368noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post-70153824597010546102007-06-10T06:49:00.000-04:002007-06-10T06:49:00.000-04:00Yikes! Thanks Jenn. :)Yikes! Thanks Jenn. :)Januaryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13036651950996873368noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post-88015559561573321892007-06-09T22:20:00.000-04:002007-06-09T22:20:00.000-04:00Had some time and thought I would poke around a bi...Had some time and thought I would poke around a bit more. Damn, girl. You are good.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post-19129130420195755832007-06-08T11:52:00.000-04:002007-06-08T11:52:00.000-04:00The ending got me...nailed it down. I will be bac...The ending got me...nailed it down. I will be back by through the Poetry Thursday summer hiatus, of course--how would I get my January-poetry fix otherwise?<BR/>Love,<BR/>D.Left-handed Trees...https://www.blogger.com/profile/06057727021295729384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post-31913008881968616242007-06-07T20:48:00.000-04:002007-06-07T20:48:00.000-04:00Love, love, love the language and tone of this. It...Love, love, love the language and tone of this. It begs (me!) to be read aloud in a bright clipped tone.Debhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14744896385434246402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post-54386672450322780532007-06-07T16:33:00.000-04:002007-06-07T16:33:00.000-04:00Love the contrasts of the bliss and the pain and t...Love the contrasts of the bliss and the pain and the cloudiness of what's between the two. Great job!paris parfaithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05457437124988976587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post-19224863809769767152007-06-07T16:05:00.000-04:002007-06-07T16:05:00.000-04:00I like the contrasts in this poem and that feeling...I like the contrasts in this poem and that feeling you capture of hovering in and out reality. This line really struck me, <BR/><BR/>"The bottom of a glass feels<BR/>too much like love, like courage,<BR/>where that mangy dog sleeps."bookbindshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06116009455925925638noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post-35137194122303672572007-06-07T16:04:00.000-04:002007-06-07T16:04:00.000-04:00There's some very vivid images in this. I loved it...There's some very vivid images in this. I loved it, although I can't vouch for his accuracy, having been a little too "merry" for my own good at a church meeting once, but never totally smashedCatherinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08236329216260906624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post-4978190080266307162007-06-07T15:29:00.000-04:002007-06-07T15:29:00.000-04:00I have felt this way once on pink champagne... "th...I have felt this way once on pink champagne... "the language of the smashed". Never again...<BR/>A great poem, January! Very evocative!Reginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14287107184977896696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post-67495632541188420012007-06-07T14:41:00.000-04:002007-06-07T14:41:00.000-04:00"The bottom of a glass feelstoo much like love, li..."The bottom of a glass feels<BR/>too much like love, like courage,<BR/>where that mangy dog sleeps."<BR/><BR/>Some lines! I must ssay, you put your thoughts very well.gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14397387.post-90984159835741490372007-06-07T14:30:00.000-04:002007-06-07T14:30:00.000-04:00keep writin' girl! you're amazing!keep writin' girl! you're amazing!Michelle (a.k.a. la vie en rose)https://www.blogger.com/profile/05798925731935380676noreply@blogger.com