Hmm - I sense some frustration in this piece. It's subtle, but it's there. A much shorter poem that you normally post, and very passionate and direct. I like it.
I was going to switch to blogger beta but after reading your post I'm sure as hell not. Yikes!
I haven't made the switch, and probably won't after all the trouble I've had with blogger the past week or so. I agree with twitches - there's power in this piece. :)
Admittedly, some of the functionally is better. But, I can't log into certain blogger sites. I would wait a while to update your service.
Twitches: I was trying to balance my angst with the poetic. Did you like the directness, and how I looked outward and then back inward? I hate disclaimers but I am the speaker in this poem!
Amen! It's driving me insane trying to leave comments. I'm thankful to have Typepad!
I'm disappointed to hear that beta is a PITA because I liked the idea of some of the features they're adding with it. Gggrrr....HonestToPete, Blogger is going to drive me make me join the stampede to TypePad yet.
I agree with twitch. It's very ... moving. A fine piece!
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