Poem for Poetry Thursday

Happy Poetry Thursday. I am in Atlanta for the AWP Conference--will post photos and updates later tonight.

Today’s poem is a found poem, found on (read: shamefully lifted from) the back cover reviews of a few poetry books. I was daydreaming that if I got my manuscript published, what would it say on the back cover. And then I thought of all the melodramatic text that goes in some of those reviews and testimonials, full of contrasts. This is one I really want to refine so I’ll post a revision next week. Could use suggestions for a title.



What I Want Someone to Say on the Back Cover of My First Poetry Collection

Say I am a hammer. Say I am a velvet wrecking ball, a rip tooth saw, a nine-millimeter with one bullet left in the chamber. Say my poetry is that bullet. This collection frightens and comforts you. It is my best work ever, in which I have brought all of my faculties to bear. Say my words leave you stripped to the core, to the underlife you never knew existed. Say I’ve created a new poetic that beckons the best traditions of the Masters. I have created a shower of metaphors plucked from annihilation for this reckoning, shining a spotlight on an America hardly ever seen in contemporary literature. Say these poems evoke sympathy for the damned, yet celebrate our resilience. Say this is a must-read for anyone who has ever truly lived. Say that this is the present you’re already homesick for.

Comments

Anonymous said…
I think that is a great back cover. How about for a title.

"Serrated Society"
Why not? This works for me! :)
Dennis said…
I love the power suggested by the words within.
Regina said…
Wow- I'd buy it! You go, January!
If that is on the backcover, I would go for it!

gautami
Parallel Streams
RomanceWriter said…
Oh my god, I love it. I am doing a post linking to this.
RomanceWriter said…
My title suggestion

Poet Laureate
Anonymous said…
i expect to see this on a book coming to shelves near me soon! I love how it demands attention with all of the command-style sentences. and i love how it reveals how you'd like your work to be seen, how you want to be as a poet. the words in it are so strong and big ... and yet there's an implied vulnerability.

have fun at the conference!
Anonymous said…
This is so great. I loved the title AND the idea. I am especially in love with the final line. I feel the desire to write the poems you want coming through this description, and I also feel a bittersweet echo of fear from the speaker, worry that this has not been accomplished in the poems. It's really clever because this poem does accomplish it.
I am completely inept with titles--but I want to read this on the back of your first poetry collection. I mean it...
Love,
D.
Clockworkchris said…
Your idea was so wonderful and that it is a fantastic poem. Man I wish I had something other than a picture on the back of my books now.
Catherine said…
Wow! You set high standards for yourself, if you want your poetry to live up to that description. But I do think that poetry shouldn't aim for anything less.
Jim Brock said…
Jan:

Blurbperfect!

Actually, I love this as a companion piece to my poetry contest prose poem a couple weeks ago. There's gotta be money in this sort of thing, no?

I know you're having a great time in Atlanta.
wendy said…
What a affirmation from you for you.So bravely confident, without arrogance. A bold steo that will be rewarded. Have fun basking it the poet glow.
January said…
Wendy, I think poem is affirmation of my arrogance!
January said…
Thanks everyone for the feedback. Will see out all of your poems when I return from Atlanta.
January said…
Jim, truth be told, I had your poem in mind when I wrote mine. Although, I did not lift any copy from "Pictures."

Wish you were here!
Emily said…
I think you already have the perfect title. This was fantastic. I really liked the velvet wrecking ball and the present you are homesick for...that is a beautiful line.
The present you are already homesick for was what grabbed me most too...

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