NaPoWriMo 2
Rain Catchers
The sexy rain calls us back from sleep,
as if we have been away too long,
as if what we carry in these bodies
will spill out of this world and into the next.
Nights like this we awaken
to the first small stirring,
a spasm so slight it couldn’t be
anything but breathing.
We are animal in the dark coming
toward each other. There is no name
for us. Nights like this are about survival:
we use ourselves as shelter,
break our soft bones to build a fire,
turn our lips into rain catchers
and wait for the storm to pass.
The sexy rain calls us back from sleep,
as if we have been away too long,
as if what we carry in these bodies
will spill out of this world and into the next.
Nights like this we awaken
to the first small stirring,
a spasm so slight it couldn’t be
anything but breathing.
We are animal in the dark coming
toward each other. There is no name
for us. Nights like this are about survival:
we use ourselves as shelter,
break our soft bones to build a fire,
turn our lips into rain catchers
and wait for the storm to pass.
Comments
i really like this one. love, love, love the rain catcher methapor. "break our soft bones to build a fire" - beautiful!
thanks for this inspiration, just when i was about to pull my hair out with not being able to come up with anything for NaPoWriMo. =)
Looking forward to reading all of yours tho'!
P.S. You're so coming to Florida in Fall/Winter 2009. You do know that.
Good seeing you last night. I'm going to check out those sites you gave me, and I'm looking into the Falmouth reading now.
really and truly.
i had forgotten how much
i enjoy your words.
and break our soft bones to build
a fire....
you are amazing.
Good seeing you last night.
It's never too late to participate in NaPoWriMo. You can either start a blog and post publically, or you can just write your poems in a journal.
The goal is to have an abundance of drafts to work with after the month is over.